copywriting-hooks

Copywriting Hooks

The method

A hook's only job is to make the reader want sentence 2. Voice, structure, formatting, all of it, follow from that one job.

What makes a reader want sentence 2 is one of five levers:

1. Open a gap. Pose something incomplete that the reader needs to close. Curiosity gap, question, open loop.
2. Break a prediction. State something that violates the reader's prior. Contrarian, definition reversal, surprising statistic.
3. Drop into a scene. Load sensory or specific detail that builds a vivid frame. In medias res, concrete detail, time anchor.
4. Promise a payoff. Name an outcome the reader wants. Benefit, "if you... then this", direct problem.
5. Borrow weight. Lean on a name, number, or quote that carries embedded authority. Authority hook, statistic, quote with disagreement.

A strong hook usually pulls two levers at once. "Frank Sinatra, holding a glass of bourbon..." is scene plus open loop. "Most people think X. They're wrong." is prediction-break plus gap. Single-lever hooks can still work but are easier to ignore.

Three further principles:

• Specific beats abstract every time. Replace "many companies" with "Stripe, Shopify, Vercel". Replace "recently" with a date. Replace "studies show" with the actual finding or cut the claim.
• The first sentence must force the second. Read each candidate cold. If you would not click sentence 2 after sentence 1, rewrite.
• Match technique to article type. Personal essay does not open like a tutorial. See the type-fit table below.

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Behavior

When this skill triggers:

1. Confirm the brief. Topic, audience, target language (EN, FR, or both), approximate length, where it will be published. If any of these is unclear and material, ask before generating.
2. Pick 3 to 4 hooks from the catalog below that are genuinely different. Different levers, not three flavors of contrarian.
3. Write 2 candidates per hook, specific to the user's article. The two candidates within one hook should explore different angles (different anecdote, different statistic, different scene), not be rewordings of each other.
4. Present using the Output format below.
5. Use ask_user_input_v0 if available. The choice is a small fixed set, which is what that tool is for.
6. Wait for the user's pick. Do not pick for them.
7. After they pick, name what the choice commits the rest of the article to. A contrarian hook commits paragraphs 2 to 3 to defending the non-consensus claim. A scene opener commits the next section to either resolving the scene or productively delaying it.

Diversification rule. Across your 3 to 4 options include at minimum:

• One intellectual hook (contrarian, definition reversal, historical analogy, curiosity gap)
• One sensory hook (in medias res, concrete detail)
• One reader-direct hook (conditional, direct problem, promise)

This guarantees real choice. Three flavors of contrarian is not a choice.

Type-fit reference:

Article type	Strong hooks	Avoid
Technical deep-dive	concrete detail, statistic, contrarian, direct problem	personal confession, scene opener
Personal essay	in medias res, personal confession, time anchor, definition reversal	bold claim, direct problem
Opinion / contrarian	bold claim, definition reversal, contrarian, quote + disagreement	gentle setup, dictionary opener
Tutorial / how-to	direct problem (PAS), promise, conditional	scene opener, historical analogy
Reported / investigative	concrete detail, time anchor, in medias res, statistic	bold claim, definition reversal
Listicle	curiosity gap, counted stakes, conditional	personal confession, in medias res
Longform analysis	historical analogy, statistic, contrarian	direct problem
Newsletter issue	personal confession + open loop, conditional, curiosity gap	dictionary opener

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Output format

Always present options exactly like this:

## Hook options for: [working title]

**Option 1: [Hook name]** ([lever])
A. [Candidate 1]
B. [Candidate 2]

**Option 2: [Hook name]** ([lever])
A. [Candidate 1]
B. [Candidate 2]

**Option 3: [Hook name]** ([lever])
A. [Candidate 1]
B. [Candidate 2]

Which? Reply with letter combination (e.g., "1B") or "more" for different techniques.

If the user says "more" or "none", produce 3 different hooks (not new candidates for the same hooks). If the user says "blend 1A and 2B", write a combined hook and check in again.

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The hook catalog (18)

Each hook: what it does, examples (mix EN and FR, real and illustrative), when to use, when to avoid.

1. Curiosity Gap

Open an information gap the reader wants closed.

• EN: "How does Shen Yun make any money? Short answer: they don't." (Packy McCormick)
• EN: "Many years ago, one mustard dominated the supermarket shelves: French's." (Gladwell, "The Ketchup Conundrum")
• FR: "Trois startups françaises ont franchi le milliard cette année. Aucune n'est dans la tech."
• EN: "I've been a surgeon for eight years. For the past couple of them, my performance in the operating room has reached a plateau." (Gawande)

Use when: you can honestly close the gap in 2 or 3 sentences. The gap must be one the reader cares about. Avoid: vague gaps ("You won't believe what happened next") that the reader cannot even guess at.

2. Contrarian

Knock down a consensus belief the reader holds.

• EN: "Prevailing wisdom claims that the best way to achieve what we want in life is to set specific, actionable goals." (Clear, "Forget About Setting Goals", proceeds to argue the opposite)
• EN: "To do something well you have to like it. That idea is not exactly novel." (Graham, "Do What You Love", proceeds to complicate it)
• EN: "If you're not saying 'HELL YEAH!' about something, say no." (Sivers)
• FR: "Le Marketing est TOUT ce que l'IA ne peut pas faire !" (Truphème)

Use when: you have a defensible non-consensus view and 200 to 400 words to defend it. Avoid: strawmen, gratuitous edginess, contrarianism for its own sake.

3. Bold Claim / Promise

State the outcome upfront, before the proof.

• EN: "At 60 miles an hour the loudest noise in this new Rolls-Royce comes from the electric clock." (Ogilvy)
• EN: "They laughed when I sat down at the piano. But when I started to play!—" (Caples 1925)
• EN: "Give me 15 minutes and I'll give you a super-power memory." (Schwartz)
• FR: "En 5 minutes : la structure qui fait passer le taux de complétion d'un article de 18% à 64%."

Use when: you can deliver on the promise concretely in the article. Avoid: promises larger than the payoff. Destroys trust permanently.

4. Scene Opener / In Medias Res

Drop the reader inside a specific moment, no setup.

• EN: "Frank Sinatra, holding a glass of bourbon in one hand and a cigarette in the other, stood in a dark corner of the bar between two attractive but fading blondes who sat waiting for him to say something." (Talese)
• EN: "We were somewhere around Barstow on the edge of the desert when the drugs began to take hold." (Thompson)
• EN: "The center was not holding." (Didion)
• FR: "Le 14 mai 2024, à 6h12, trois hommes en civil sonnent à la porte d'un appartement du XVe arrondissement."

Use when: longform, profile, reported piece, essay. Avoid: short technical pieces where the reader has not earned the scene yet.

5. Surprising Statistic

Lead with a number that violates the prior.

• EN: "You have five seconds to get people's attention." (Housel, self-demonstrating)
• EN: "Thirty-seven thousand Americans died in car accidents in 1955, six times today's rate adjusted for miles driven." (Housel)
• EN: "Approximately 40 percent of the actions you perform each day are habits, not actual decisions." (Clear)
• FR: "Tu as moins de 3 secondes pour convaincre tes audiences que ton contenu est intéressant." (Truphème)

Use when: the number is genuinely surprising and you can cite it accurately. Avoid: vague stats ("studies show 90%..."), stats that confirm the reader's prior (no surprise equals no hook).

6. Question

Pose a question the reader actually wants answered.

• EN: "If you collected lists of techniques for doing great work in a lot of different fields, what would the intersection look like?" (Graham)
• EN: "Why do we make kids go to school?" (Caplan)
• FR: "Pourquoi 80% des articles LinkedIn ne dépassent jamais 100 vues ? Spoiler : ce n'est pas l'algorithme."
• FR: "Avez-vous le courage de gagner la moitié d'un million de dollars cette année ?" (Schwartz)

Use when: the reader was implicitly carrying the question. Avoid: "Have you ever wondered...?", "Did you know...?", "What if I told you...?". These presuppose curiosity not yet formed.

7. Quote + Disagreement

Borrow weight, then twist.

• EN: "Vernor Vinge: 'We are on the edge of change comparable to the rise of human life on Earth.'" (Urban setup)
• EN: "Steve Jobs said people don't know what they want until you show it to them. For SaaS, this is exactly backwards."
• EN: "Henry Ford supposedly said his customers would have asked for faster horses. For most products, that excuse is wrong."
• FR: "Henry Ford disait qu'on lui aurait demandé des chevaux plus rapides. Pour 90% des produits, c'est faux."

Use when: you have a real quote that supports or genuinely contrasts your point. Avoid: misattributed Einstein, Seneca, Confucius, Bouddha platitudes. Cliché.

8. Personal Confession

Admit something vulnerable, then universalize.

• EN: "I cheated on my husband." (Strayed)
• EN: "I've been thinking about my parents, who are in their mid-60s. During my first 18 years, I spent some time with my parents during at least 90% of my days." (Urban, "The Tail End")
• EN: "It's been a minute. This is as long as I've gone without writing an essay since starting Not Boring." (McCormick)
• FR: "À 34 ans, j'ai démissionné sans plan B. Voici ce que personne ne dit sur la suite."

Use when: personal byline, essay, newsletter. Avoid: corporate byline, technical articles where the author voice is not personal, performative vulnerability ("I almost didn't write this...").

9. Concrete Specific Detail

Replace abstraction with a single vivid detail.

• EN: "John Laroche is a tall guy, skinny as a stick, pale-eyed, slouch-shouldered, and sharply handsome, despite the fact that he is missing all his front teeth." (Orlean)
• EN: "Charles Bukowski was an alcoholic, a womanizer, a chronic gambler, a lout, a cheapskate, a deadbeat, and on his worst days, a poet." (Manson)
• FR: "Quand on la voit arriver dans les locaux du Bondy Blog, ce samedi 24 février, difficile de se dire qu'elle est fichée illégalement par les services de renseignement français."
• FR: "Un Post-it collé sur mon écran : 'Supprime ton premier paragraphe.'"

Use when: profile, reported piece, contrarian biographical setup. Avoid: specificity that does not advance the thesis (clutter).

10. Pattern Interrupt

Break expected rhythm with a fragment.

• EN: "Wait." (Godin style)
• EN: "Stop."
• EN: "This is not an article about productivity. It's an article about identity."
• FR: "Non. Ce que vous avez lu cette semaine sur l'IA est faux. Voici pourquoi."

Use when: rhythm-driven content, opinion piece, when the reader expects flow and you want to interrupt it. Avoid: every article. It becomes its own pattern fast.

11. Direct Problem (PAS)

Name the pain, sharpen it, hint at solution.

• EN: "Your articles aren't read. The data says you lose 80% of readers by paragraph two. There's a fix, and it's not what you've been doing."
• EN: "If you're like most marketing managers, you don't have enough time to write your white papers, and the ones you outsource come back generic." (Bly)
• FR: "Vos emails ne sont pas ouverts. Trois mois, taux plafonné à 12%. Le problème n'est pas l'objet, c'est l'expéditeur."
• FR: "Vos articles ne sont pas lus. 80% des lecteurs décrochent dès le deuxième paragraphe. Et la solution n'est pas celle que vous croyez."

Use when: tutorial, how-to, sales-adjacent content. Avoid: manufactured problems. Reads as fear-mongering. The pain must be real and recognizable.

12. Promise / Benefit

State a specific, bounded outcome.

• EN: "Read this in 5 minutes and you'll never write a weak opening again."
• EN: "By the end of this article, you'll know exactly when to use goroutines and when not to."
• EN: "Three things separate writers who get read from writers who don't. None involve writing every day."
• FR: "En 5 minutes : la structure qui fait passer le taux de complétion d'un article de 18% à 64%."

Use when: tutorial, how-to. Avoid: vague promises ("Learn how to be more productive"). Add a time bound or a number to anchor it.

13. Historical Analogy

Open with a vignette from history, pivot to the present.

• EN: "On a Tuesday morning in March 1976, a 21-year-old college dropout sold his Volkswagen Bus for 1,500 dollars. He used the money to build the first Apple computer."
• EN: "In 1965, Robert Lucas wrote a four-page paper that broke macroeconomics."
• EN: Wright Brothers vignette (Housel, "Three Big Things"), pivots to demographics and interest rates.
• FR: "En 1903, à Kitty Hawk, deux frères réparateurs de vélos volent pendant 12 secondes. Personne ne remarque. Voici ce que cette indifférence dit de l'adoption technologique aujourd'hui."

Use when: longform analysis, opinion piece, idea essay. Avoid: tutorials, news pieces. Reads as indulgent.

14. Definition Reversal

"X is not what you think. It's Y."

• EN: "Procrastination isn't laziness. It's a fight between two parts of your brain."
• EN: "This is not an article about productivity. It's an article about identity."
• EN: "Generics were the most requested Go feature for a decade. Three years in, the people who pushed hardest for them are telling you to stop using them."
• FR: "Le copywriting n'est pas de l'écriture. C'est de la psychologie déguisée en phrases."

Use when: opinion piece, contrarian deep dive. Avoid: when your reframe is just a slight angle. Sounds gimmicky.

15. Authority Borrow

Lead with a name plus a specific action.

• EN: "Warren Buffett, at 91, still reads 500 pages a day."
• EN: "When Steve Jobs returned to Apple in 1997, he killed 70% of the product line in his first year."
• EN: "A boy once asked Charlie Munger..." (Housel narrative variant)
• FR: "Quand Bernard Arnault a racheté Tiffany pour 16 milliards, trois analystes ont prédit un échec. Ils s'étaient tous trompés sur la même chose."

Use when: business piece, profile, analytical essay. Avoid: name-dropping without payoff. The action must be specific and relevant.

16. Time Anchor

Lead with a specific date, hour, or moment.

• EN: "October 2005. Three journalists set up a blog in an apartment of the cité Blanqui, in Bondy."
• EN: "In 2022, the

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